Dangerous.

She knows what she has, before he knows what he's lost.

She slightly tilts her head, Her eyes are ice cold.

Darkly rimmed with seduction.

She has the power and she knows it.

He's transfixed by her erotically, lush, lips.

Staring at her as she bites her bottom lip.

He moves closer to her. She warns him.

Her eyes intense. Burning into his.

He can't handle her.

 

Reviews

[Chris]

Chuckling here... an intense and interesting "view".

[Planet x]

I know that this is an old poem but I really love how you expressed your emotions here so well

[M. Amphet Salt]

I usually give reviews, but all I will say is God, I relate to this. This is my girl...I just havn't lost her.

[Spoken]

She knows what she has, before he knows what he's lost.

great line. I loved the whole build of a man overcome with desire for a wild dangerous woman he cannot handle. Very cool.