Look how they shine for you.

Look how they shine for you.

A Poem by Unforgettable1230

The wind brushing past my face.

Barely numb. I can still feel it.

It's dark now. The lights from the city blurring past us.

We cruised on his motorcycle.

Rush. He is such a rush.

I'm craving it. Badly.

Headlights sliding past us. Bright.

My hair is flying in the wind.

Strands of blonde getting lost in the darkness surrounding us.

 

The stars shining just for you.

 

My face full and lush. Wind bitten.

A lovely pink color.

His hair whipping my face.

Every second.

 

My eyes are glistening.

Most of all, My eyes are shining just you, baby.

 

Letting the world pass us.

I gently kiss his cheek.

It's all just a blur now. except for you...

Nothing compares to you.

© 2008 Unforgettable1230


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Unforgettable1230
The writing pretty much sucks, just love the idea.

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That definatly doesn't suck. I thought it was awesome :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This don't really suck. I enjoyed reading it!

I love the image this poem gave me. It made me smile. =)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 26, 2008
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