Unforgettable.

Unforgettable.

A Poem by Unforgettable1230

Tonight.

is.

Unforgettable.

 

Every second, even in its most shallow moments.

The alcohol and cigarette smoke still in my clothes.

I want to absorb it all in my skin.

The taste of your lips and a McChicken are a deadly combination.

I loved it.

I love you.

 

Completely unforgettable.

© 2008 Unforgettable1230


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Simply done, yet poetically written. You have set a tone that forces the reader to recall memories of memorable times in our lives. Whether it is a smell or a certain taste, whenever they reappear, the senses are re-awakened! Awesome!

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