Safe.

Safe.

A Poem by Unforgettable1230

I see you.

You see me.

My eyes are filling up.

"C'mere" You say in a familiar voice.

You take me in your arms.

Your black sweatshirt draped around my wrists.

While everyone thinks you're the most dangerous,

I still feel the safest in your arms.

I nuzzle in the hollow of your throat.

Your face is scruffy, but I wouldn't have it any other way.

 

© 2008 Unforgettable1230


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the best things [such as lots of people in my bed naked eating popcorn not f*****g] will not be understood
cause things are disposed in our heads in such away that when going up in a down zone occurs people freak out.
being
able
to beat
that
whole
predisposed
mindset
is one of our biggest
challenges

anyway

some statements
in the poem
in my opinion

contradict the safety
you find in the
him
mentioned

consciously or not
tis weird
like the influence of
others
makes you have this disgust
for the him
that you will never be able to shake

odd
maybe
but probably
likely
considering
the
fragilness
of yourself
if im allowed to connect the
two
poems
which i am
because
i can
ha.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow very softly sensual and loving... when two people are in love they only need to understand each other... I love how you expressed that part of not listening to others but instead your heart.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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