Photo's In The Fire (Unsatisfaction)

Song Wrote 10th Febuary 2010

Suppose I say that your games don’t satisfy

Suppose I say we chop the branch to keep the tree alive.

Just let me run another mile.

Just let me steal a little smile.

Please let me toy with you cause I am bored to death

Oh I'm running to find you.

I'm hoping that your sleeping at the roadside.

Throw all the photos in the fire

And let them burn.

Whatever happened to forever.

Suppose I say the snake is tempting me

Suppose I say I’ll take fruit from the forbidden tree

Just let me run another mile.

Did I see you just crack a smile.

Just let me play you like the puppets in your life.

Oh I'm running to find you.

I'm hoping that your sleeping at the roadside.

Throw all the feelings in the fire

And let them burn.

Whatever happens to you next

Suppose I say females confuse me

Suppose I say I never truly get what they mean

Self-satisfaction this way comes

Self-satisfaction that way goes

Self-satisfaction is will never come again.

Oh I'm running to find you.

I'm hoping that your sleeping at the roadside.

Throw my feelings in the fire

And let them burn.

Author's Note

Crits?

Reviews

[Corvus]

I love the way you rhyme in this, and the verses are amazing.

Suppose I say the snake is tempting me
Suppose I say I’ll take fruit from the forbidden tree

I, being religious, noticed your reference to the Bible and I think you used it in a creative and descriptive way. Altogether, it's really good. Keep it up!

[just rose.]

I really like this. You're doing some interesting things with rhymes here.