Crimes On Valentines (Salty, Slowly......Misery)

Song wrote 14th Febuary 2010

Although to me it seems,
You were her hopes and dreams,
A little more she died inside,
On a horse of tears she'll ride.

I can't imagine what she felt,
The mass of pain to her you dealt,
Don't care of her past crimes;
You cast her off on valentines?

The smiles quickly turn to frowns,
In salty tears she slowly drowns,
Overcome with her misery,
My conscience left to pay your fee.

I lay awake in empathy,
That which she feels, happened to me,
Don't give a toss 'bout her past crimes;
You cast her off on valentines?

Don't look back, walk down your path,
Don't stare too long at the aftermath,
Don't prolong the pain, to make her well;
She's getting better can't you tell?

Just one last thing, ask I will;
Its why your shadow, leaves her chilled,
Screw her past crimes;
You cast her off on valentines?

What went on inside your head?
A part of her, of you is dead,
Misery left her almost sick,
Her heart shaped clock fails to tick.

Author's Note

Crits?

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I love the fact that "You cast her off on valentines?" is repeated, I can definitely imagine this being a song... Or any other songs that you've wrote, in fact.

Really good once again, didn't thought that you are such good lyricist ^^

Since this is like, the third review I wrote to your work, maybe you could return some love, eh?

[Sherratt133]

I shall do indeed