Autumn Rain

Rain

splashing on my window

I look out

all I see is a wet grey glow

beautiful

yet so dull

autumn in the city

into the countryside

is where I wish to go

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Rain seems to be a delight anywhere...until you have to go out in it.
An enjoyable poem. Well written.

[Coyote Song]

thanks a lot!

[Miss Owl]

The rain and fall, how they go together. The rainy season hits and rips down all the fiery beautiful leaves from the trees.

[divyata!]

good lines... well used antithesis.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much.

[Leslie Philibert]

Impressive..this time of year calls out outside, into the half light, the rich tones of Autumn. Fine job.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks Leslie very much.

[Tina Kline]

A lovely autumn poem with rain. Yes, winter does have its unique beauty in the city but the countryside in autumn knows no compare. An outstanding poem.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much.

[Cherrie]

Thank you, so much I like to keep my writing diverse, in hopes to improve my skills, but my favorite thing to write about is nature.
P.S. I am happy to be the first to weigh in on this lovely little couplet.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very very much.