Sadness

Teardrops

into a placid pool
creates endless grief
and
memories

.

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Ahhh!! Great emotion expressed within your short work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Your visits were uplifting..Sara

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

You are quite welcome..Sara

[Black Cat Fever]

Ah, the pain of sadness can go on and on throughout our life if its never healed.
A powerful poem, has a powerful impact.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!

[Eric Cox]

Strong imagery here painting intense sadness. No one should feel such sadness, but in this world it is understandable and tragic. A well penned poem, indeed.

[Coyote Song]

thanks so very much my friend!

[Tina Kline]

Nicely done. This really captures how far reaching pain and sadness can go. Good poem.
I enjoyed this a lot.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so very much! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

this has a haiku like character, thoughful and pensive. Good one.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!!