Nature

Cinquain, I hope.

Fir trees
Swishing in breezes
The setting sun shines bright
Creating lingering shadows
Lost time

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Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your very expressive poem even though written with few words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Okay

Sara

[Black Cat Fever]

Very lovely. I have lost time as I wander about the forest by my home. It's so easy. Peacefulness in God's grand wildness. Excellent poem.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so very much!

[taz mania]

this is beautiful. I wish it was longer

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much!

[Eric Cox]

Beautiful and haunting. Cool pen upon this.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!!!!!!!

[Eric Cox]

:) ... :) .... :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Cinquains are really great, I discoved them myself a few weeks ago, and this is a good one...

[Coyote Song]

Thank you much!

[Tina Kline]

Nicely done. I like this. The feel of nature yet there is something lingering, a mystery of some sort. An excellent poem indeed!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!!!!!!!