Attention Seeker

A soft clicking
outside my open kitchen window
where stands
an ancient Silver Maple tree

I look out
wondering
and see a red headed wood pecker
drawing attention
to himself

I smile
.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

A cheering discovery indeed, wood peckers are fun to watch as they peck away. Good imagery and light and a fun read. Nicely done!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)

[Coyote Song]

..............:)

[Tina Kline]

I like this a lot. It is cute and playful and very realistic. Great job on this write.

[Leslie Philibert]

a nice write, that has a tanka feeling, with impressice, compact imagery, like this..

[Black Cat Fever]

Good poem. I love wood peckers and all birds. Have a lot around my house. Nicely done!