University Morning

in the morning
as night's dark fades
I lay snuggled in bed
listening to the sweet voice
of the robin singing

I wish
I just could stay here
all day
let this moment last
and not become
a moment of the past

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

A very positive poem. I feel like this some mornings here at home. I Just want to say in bed, peaceful and relaxed and listen to nature all day long. Good job!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[Eric Cox]

A tranquil, beautiful scene and then longing to remain within, penned well. Your imagery comes across to touch the reader. Great job.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much Eric!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome :)

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful, very peaceful. I let out a soft sigh and say, I so agree with you. What a tranquil peaceful moment. Who wouldn't want it to last forever? A truly wonderful poem.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

Elegant, quiet, thoughtful...great !

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!