Box Turtles

box turtles
in my shoes box
surprise!
surprise!
who put them there?
I look at my niece
I see her secret
little girl smile
she cant quite hide

secret solved.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Fun to read. A light filled, lighthearted poem with an uplifting feel created. Nice pen upon this!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you Eric! :)

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome. :)

[Black Cat Fever]

A fun and enjoyable poem. I enjoyed this one a lot!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[AYVID N]

Very cute and endearing! Just loved it!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[Stacey Watts]

Awe that is very sweet. The mystery and wonderment of a child is truly a beautiful thing. Very well written.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

A fun poem! Kids can be playful. If the box turtle was real I hope it made its way back to a safe place. Delightful!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!