Dreaming and Robins

robins
singing all morning
misty rain falling
I am waiting
for the sun
to warm my dreams

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

I like the imagery of nature here, I especially like the strength to the ending lines.
The beauty of Spring is uplifting.
Nicely done!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you much Eric!

[Eric Cox]

You're welcome.

[Coyote Song]

:) smiles for you!

[Black Cat Fever]

A really strong poem. It's full of peace and beauty....

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[AYVID N]

You are simply wonderful here. I could feel the moist wet morning and I could feel the warm sunlight emerging...

Superbly done Coyote. Thanks so very much for sharing.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

Coyote is a gifted poet, and proves this here, a short poem with lots of wisdom, has a haiku kind of feeling with its good observations on nature, very well done.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much!

[Stacey Watts]

Me too. I saw little tiny buds on my Rose of Sharon bush today. It is close to spring. Your words are truly beautiful here. Nice work.

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[Tina Kline]

A very soothing poem, full of the beauty of nature and waiting for the show to unfurl into the warmth of the sun. Lovely!

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!