I Wonder.....

I remember
when I was small
the spiderweb
dangling
above my bed

All night
I wondered
in deep fear
where is the spider?

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A short but effective comment on fear! Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

I like this write on inner fears. Very artistic...

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Eric Cox]

Yikes! What a chilling sight and thought.
Nicely done! Excellent spooky vibe to this.

[Black Cat Fever]

Eeks! This is very very creepy!
Very effective in its horror!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Leslie Philibert]

Another very well observed poem, honest and well written

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

Eeks! This one is chilling for me. I've had similar experiences as a child, just wondering where the nightmarish spider went when it wasn't killed and still creeping out my bedroom. Good job on this!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!