Cold Night

Feather soft breezes
with an icy bite
my tears freeze
on my cheeks
long is the night

Reviews

[Black Cat Fever]

Another poem brimming with emotional pain. A very good poem expressing pain.

[PurpleQuartz]

You did a good job on this poem. Creates clear imagery.

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[PurpleQuartz]

Your welcome : )

[Eric Cox]

So nice crafting of this, the lines have such strength to the imagery.
Very good writing my friend.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks Eric!

[Eric Cox]

:)

[Tina Kline]

Another poem of sadness. The coldness is the weather and how one feels inside when they are deeply sad. Very good job on this.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!