My Rain

silver droplets of rain
falling on my inner landscape
shimmering with my pain

Reviews

[FlamingPhoenix]

So short, but incredibly eloquent and the imagery is stunning and transformative. A simple concept, yet one I've never considered. The beauty of a true artist is that they have the ability to change the way one sees and experiences things. I doubt I'll ever see rain the same.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!

[Black Cat Fever]

Very sad and brimming with pain. A very good poem.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!

[Eric Cox]

Such sadness comes through vividly. Very well penned. I can relate to rain falling, we can only hope the clouds part and the sun bursts through.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much Eric.

[Eric Cox]

welcome :)

[Tina Kline]

A very strong image of deep sadness. You did a good job on this. I like it.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!