Darkness Comes...

A dark poem.

Darkness comes creeping
are you aware its calling
do you feel death
all over you crawling

Darkness comes demanding
madness in your mind
do you hear the world screaming
yourself can you find

Darkness comes invading
your identity all but gone
your eyes are now vacant
years ago you went wrong

Author's Note

Trying my hand at another dark poem.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Cool dark write. Love the eerie creativeness. Excellent job.

[Black Cat Fever]

Wow, impressive dark write. For me, it was very creepy and chilling, that's what made me like this so much. Good work on this.

[Tina Kline]

A very dark and eerie write. I like this a lot. It flows smooth and has excellent rhyming.

Thanks for posting this is my group: Shades of Darkness.