Devotion

My moment of resolve.

Night After night,

I want to write poetry,

Good or bad,

Less happy than hopeful,

A somber,

Rhythm-less nation,

Funny.

The way a sad man tells a joke,

A man who wants love he can't ask for.

Author's Note

I'm definitely going to play with this.
Any suggestions?

-Thanks for reading

:)

Reviews

[Andrew Wright]

Your emotional conveyance is on point once again. I'd like to see more of this style alongside your more narrative pieces.

Your open, honest speech here hits right to the heart of the matter. and in this case, the reader. I encourage you, keep writing

[Tamara (The Coy & Clear Poet)]

Thank you reader :)
I think that'd be quite the challenge for me. I hope you'll critique my future works as well ; )

[carol burgess romance]

what changes were you think of..personaly I would leave it the way it is..it is all connected and comes off to me as finished...nice