I am Quick

I am Quick

A Poem by Eliza Pleasant
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Another poem written in my class... Enjoy!

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Quick

Cunning

Sly

Each muscle is tense, they almost snap.

I see him.

He senses danger.

Will he run?

The night hides me admiringly.

Am I destined to do this?

A sharp pain in my stomach shouts yes.

I am quick.

He is gone.

© 2009 Eliza Pleasant


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Your poem just create the picture of a night creature in my head as I was reading this. I really like like like this a lot!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago
You are quick! And this is nice . . .

wonderful work I'm glad to read

Posted 15 Years Ago


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 Added on November 29, 2009

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Eliza Pleasant
Eliza Pleasant

Lubbock, TX



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