You Left me in Remnants

I'm falling. Everything in my immediate

surroundings seems to quiver and shake

when I'm not quite ready to let go of sanity yet.

Anger and impatience and heartbreak and

disappointment well inside of me, red raging

turmoil that turns into a tumultuous pit of hell

that rots

and shrieks 

and screams

and boils

and suffocates

inside of me...

And I miss you.

I miss the beat of your heart against my cheek,

your palm against my breast, 

your soul adoring mine.

I miss your long, sinewy arms folded against my back.

I miss those beautiful blue eyes rimmed with

dark lashes of kindnes...

But you have gone and left me broken,

left me crying and not whole.

You left me in remnants of a person,

tattered rags of shattered confidence and

happiness and...

love. Even self respect.

Reviews

[G. Anderson]

Thank you, I appreciate it (:

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Wow, i liked this and enjoyed it so much.
There is so much truth within your words.
I loved the last stanza. Awesome!