Knees to Floor

Whatever. I really don't give a s**t anymore.

The streams of crimson sorrow,
they well and gush
deeper every time.

I dream of your breathtaking face.
Crying. Stumbling.
Somnolent in pain and anguish.

The night grows deeper.
I fall onto my knees.
They crack into the floor.

And I breathe no more.

Reviews

[Mr Whiskers]

I like how the first line is red, like you see the blood but then the rest is fading into death and darkness. Also, love that you used somnolent--not a lot of people even know the word and it's one of my secret favorites. It's a good piece altogether.

[Krista]

Oh my god. I hope you don't mean that. You know I care about you right? Also I am here if you need to talk. Its very well written but very sad.

[~Xx Fallen Angel xX~]

Oh my gosh. Is this about him? And you better not be dying on me. I will come give you CPR!

[Marie Harrison]

Very vivid write. So sad.

[zombiikillah666]

weve all been here.
time will pass and you'll
be alright. good write though. (:
i like it. :D