Love Is...

first thing ever posted on here. comments encouraged, i never let ne one know i write, i need to know how im doing :))))

Love is Patient...

Love is Kind...

Until it gets you in a Bind...

You must attempt to stay Alive..

Before you take the faitful Dive...

Into an ocean of dark Love...

That was once as white as Dove...

Now blackened by the heartache Above...

It will deprive you from precious Breath...

And send you to an early Death...

Author's Note

PPPLLLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEEE comment and review telling me what u think. its my first on here:))

Reviews

[EverEmma]

That is beautiful. The way the italics and boldface words come together increases the power of this piece by 100%. Wonderful job. Do not be ashamed of your writing. Your friends and family will love it. Be fearless

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the entire composition of the poetic~ from meaning to italics and strike through to the extremely effective verbally illustrated decomposition of love~ works extraordinarily well to completely captivate the reader and catch them up in the overall aura~

[WayOath]

Wow, this reminds me of something my friend would write. Her name is xFaerieCorpsex if you would like to check her out. I think that this surrounds what should be the meaning of love. Very great poem and I love the format you chose to put it in. Everything you are syaing is so true. Love the last line. Great job!