All I Wanna Do is Cry

All I wanna do is cry and never stop

I miss you and want you back

I feel if I cry it will make everything alright

But Im still afraid to let you know that I am really hurting

All I wanna do is cry and never stop 

I feel as if I was the one who did all the wrong

And Im scared to move

I dont wanna leave you in the past

I want you to be part of my future

But now that will never happen

Cause all I wanna do is cry and never stop

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dominique]

This is so beautiful and sad if only the person who hurt you saw the reprcusions of it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sad poem. Remind of the great Elvis Presley song. When the love is gone. We wish for different ending. No weakness the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Oh sweety ! You shouldn't feel this way ! Break-ups can be tough but you'll get over it and i'm pretty sure you're gonna find someone much better ;) !!
Now talking about the poem, it is amazing and full of emotion, good use of anaphora, it still echoes in my mind: "All i wanna do is cry and never stop"

[Emrick]

so sad.Hope you will soon gather strength n move on.
Boys are plenty.

[Chesney W.]

this is touching... i really like this.. but its sad... a good write..

[Ink Angel]

this is a very touching write, so sad. Keep writing I feel its the best healer of all, to get your feeling out. thank you for sharing.

[Jaz Onerheim]

sad but pretty i like it xD

[Lipstick_Lesbian]

I can relate to this 150%. You did such a good job of simply stating such complex emotions that it was heartbreaking.
"I don't wanna leave you in the past
I want you to be part of my future"
STORY OF MY LIFE. Really amazing work.

[Eabani]

Very open...raw emotion...something that we can all relate too. Well done.

[Maximillion]

i do too baby i miss you too