I Will Stop Loving You

I will stop loving you,

When diamonds never sparkle and flowers cease to grow.

When the thunder never echos and rivers dont flow.

When heart no longer wonder and hands are never held.

When smiles are only memeories and hope is never felt.

When trees no longer blossom and stars refuse to shine

When God alone commands me than

I will stop loving you.

Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

I saw the title and thought it was another "I hate you" poem, but it wasn't. Way to catch me off guard with a fabulous poem :) It's a wonderful statement and you said it with the right amount of words. A+

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Aw, this is so sweet!

[MOON]

Lovely rhythm, good write .

[Maximillion]

i love you too baby

[rivers]

This is very thoughtful sentiment...Devotion to love is is a warm and comforting energy to feel... some find it a form of spirituality that lives within us...Nicely done.

[Ememuelle]

Really pretty piece. I like this a lot!

[johnnyqueer]

This is beautiful. In the seventh line than should be changed to then :)

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

awwww..............you will go against your love if god commands.....................your love will be so alone then...............................I loved this poem............directly from your heart...so sweet & nice :-)