On My Mind

I have got alot of things on my mind

I just got to let it out

I don't where to begin so I'll start from where I am at

I have been so emotional and I easily get attached

I don't know what to do

So i bury these thoughts in the back of my mind

Save them for a lonely day

 

I feel like if I can get out in the quiet

I can let it all out

Write it all down

Let the ink flow across the page

I just don't know where to begin

 

And it's breaking my heart

It's tearing me apart

All I can do is stay up late and dcry myself to sleep

All i want is for someone to love me

For I am and not who they want me to be

Honey I ain't changing

Love me for me or don't love me at all

Reviews

[Forgotten]

Line 2 Stanza one i think I should be I've not I. The word Cry on line 3 stanza 3 has a d at the beginning. I like this poem, it shows your emotional yet the line "Honey I ain't changing, Love me for me or don't love me at all" shows me that you are strong, independent, well done on this.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Honey I ain't changing
Love me for me or don't love me at all "
This should be the rule for love. We fall in love with someone for who they are. Not who we want them to be. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote