Away From Him

Snow is falling on the ground.

Ice is on the road.

Cant hardly see when you are riding in a car in the dark.

All of this is keeping us a part.

I cant stand to be away from him.

 

Not enough money to run me back and forth to his house and him to mine.

Mom does it cause she really likes him.

Car is not the best in the world.

But it gets us place to place when we need it to.

That keeps us apart to.

I can barely stand to be away from him.

 

More than an hour we are apart I cant stop thinking about him.

Thats when i know i cant stay away from him.

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Its a sweet poem, on the 4th line however it should be "Apart" not "A part" it seems more like a story or a statement, but still I understand it. It's a very sweet piece all leading up to how you feel about a certain someone.