So Emotional

So Emotional

A Poem by CourtneyShay

Im so emotional,I don't know what to do.

I want to love but I don't want to be hurt.

I have everyone believing I'm ok but I'm not.

So many problems with my life.

 

So scared to let the tears fall.

So afraid to express my feelings.

Afraid of being heartbroken.

I feel if I run I will find a place of safety.

Where there will be no need to cry, hurt or fear.

 

I'm so emotional,I don't know what to do.

I want everyone to know who I really am but scared to lose friends.

Afraid of how they will look at me afterwards.

 

I want to be DIFFERENT but I want to blend in.

I'm way to afriad of how my emotions will handle.

I'm sop emotional,I don't know what to do.

© 2012 CourtneyShay


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A very sweet poem, a few tiny mistakes I noticed however, In the final stanza 2nd line, it should be "I'm way too afraid" its only a small grammatical error and spelling error, but as a whole this poem is very good :) I look forward to reading more of your work

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have felt this way many times, great write. Last line its says sop... i am guessing it's should to be so.

Lol, and of course I am late on that :) Thanks Akanksha!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Hello Courtney! I think you wanted me to point out the small, tiny errors in here-
'lose' not 'loose' in the second line, third stanza.
'so' not 'sop' in the last line, last stanza.
'I'm' not 'Im'
'don't' not 'dont'
Please leave a space after each comma.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very nice poem! I loved how you expressed your emotions so very well. The confusion, helplessness, can all be felt by the readers. I loved it!
Can you just look at the apostrophes and spellings maybe? Thanks!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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CourtneyShay
CourtneyShay

hartselle , AL



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Hi my name is Courtney i am 16 ummmmm i have amazing friends and an amazing boyfriend.I write poems and songs.I love to sing and be around friends more..

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