The Way I Feel About You

liking someone

It's hard to describe but I think I love you babe. Don't know how you do it but no matter what you can make me smile and laugh with no control of stopping. Just like a rose needs water I feel I need you. Without you my days seems so slow and dull. You put the fun in my life. You enjoy every moment spent with me. I feel we are really meant to be together. Now i know how to describe my feelings for you........ Baby i freaken love you.

Reviews

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

keeping your heart so clear and precise is an act of love and you did it here......so beautifully ............very nice :-)

[Forgotten]

You need a comma after "But no matter what" but other a nice poem, again I feel that it had an element of a statement rather than a poem, but who am I to question your muse and technique? Great write