Set Her Free

If you really love her, set her free

This was written from the perspective of a girl (myself) who was in an abusive situation where the boy would not let her go. Please, if you're in an unstable relationship with somebody and they want to leave, please take their request with grace. If somebody is meant to be/remain in your life, they will. If not, for every door closed, another opens. But please if somebody wants to leave, don't guilt trip or threaten or mentally abuse somebody into staying. It's an experience i will never forget, and which has tainted my trust forever. 

Lastly, THIS WAS A DRAFT WRITE. I wrote this off the top of my head, stuck an image behind it, and took a screenshot. So i haven't been through and done any editing etc, i just wanted to throw this out there and see what kind of response it got. Thank you for reading!! x 

Author's Note

THIS WAS A DRAFT WRITE. I wrote this off the top of my head, stuck an image behind it, and took a screenshot. So i haven't been through and done any editing etc, i just wanted to throw this out there and see what kind of response it got. Thank you for reading! x

Reviews

[Philip Muls]

Very genuine and raw indeed. Well done.

[Melliflower]

Thank you, i was unsure about keeping this piece posted because i wrote it while caught up in a 'moment', and sometimes those moments bog the piece because i tend to get carried away. Thank you very much for the review. x

[Penelope Voljeti]

This is a lovely poem. It has such deep meaning. I saw the little blurb that this was a first draft. The only technical problem I caught was the misspelling of "begun" rather than the correct word "began". Just in case you would have missed it :) I love this so much.

[Melliflower]

Thank you for picking up the mistake, i'll be sure to edit it out if i come back to it at a later date. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece, thank you very much! x

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this. ( yeah three loves) This is breath taking and raw. the story telling in its limited length was truly talented and awe inspiring. i find the first drafts are the best, before your brain starts to tare apart the real meaning on the work with logic.

[Melliflower]

I think i'll leave this as a draft! Usually with my pieces, i'll leave the draft for a week or two and then revise them later... though once i take them apart it's like stripping meat from the bone, and i take all of the originality away. I love love love you for taking the time out to read my work, thank you!