Water

Just a poem where I try to show the differences of water.

My name is Water

And I am all consuming.

My name is Water

Look below the surface.

 

So beautiful and deep

Terrifying and shallow

Mysterious, inspiring

Deadly and coniving

 

Never ending

forever moving

     over here

                    over there

 

Unpredictable.

 

My name is Water

You know me so well.

My name is Water

Do you know me at all?

Author's Note

Any suggestions on word placement or word changes?

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

Water, a Versatile Substance, one in which we are made 3/4 of. This is a wonderful Tribute and I don't think I have seen a more Romanticized piece regarding to this life sustaining substance. Wonderful Job!

[C.A. Lucas]

Wow! I am a softy for people who write about water or eyes... you don't realize how much I appreciate this poem. It's really beautiful, I love how you make the subject what you want it to be... for example, you could have made water sweet and smooth, or dangerous, or mysterious, but you made it everything! Love it

[Courtney]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[Marie]

Very good. In the sedond verse, I don't think you need the period after "shallow" ; the words need to run in a continuous line.