Blue On Blue

I asked my friend Gage for a topic for a poem, and he just said water.. So I came out with this!

The roaring waves encompass me

As I struggle for breath.

Yet as I'm swallowed by the sea,

I shall succumb to death.

Despite my predetermined fate,

I fight against the pull

That burdens me with such a weight

Where emptiness sets full

Of the lives lost in its Abyss.

Tears fall undetected;

Blue on blue is naught but to miss

My forlorn reflection.

I smile as I sink to demise

As, peacefully, I shut my eyes.

Reviews

[Hobbit]

WOW.... What a open! When I read it, I Actually feel like Im doing through these things! You'really got something there!!! Thank you for this good piece.

[Courtney]

Thank you so much for taking the time to review this! :) I'm glad you liked it!

[Jordan's Back]

This is a really descriptive piece:

Of the lives lost in its Abyss.
Tears fall undetected;
Blue on blue is naught but to miss
My forlorn reflection.

A Write you can drown in. Excellent piece :)

[Courtney]

Thanks so much hun :) xx