Longing for Death

Fragile petals from the sky

Falling to your feet

Plunge the knife, allow to die

Nothing to compete

Fall to knees and face your shame

Offer up your soul

Beg forgiveness; clear your name

Diamonds shine through coal

Murder yourself to move past

As the only way

Broken bones with splinted cast

To remove someday

As I'm longing for death, to see the sun

You stole my life which depression does run

Reviews

[Trent Files]

Very gripping work from the start. The line about "diamonds shine through coal" is probably one of my favorites as I like similies. Extremely good work!

[Courtney]

Thanks so much! :)

[AlexValkyrie]

Very... silencing. I grabbed my attention and forced out all other thoughts. As usual you have wrought a beautiful masterpiece. Very well done.

[Courtney]

Thank you so much! That means a lot :)

[zainul]

I am impressed by your wonderful style and content.
Each line is a gem.None may be isolated to choose as the most favorite.
I congratulate you for such great work.

[Courtney]

Thank you so much! That means a lot to hear :)

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :)