Sun's Embrace

Even though it took forever, I give you this; My first truly happy poem... Ever! :)

As the sun rises over

On horizon far

Lighting emerald clover;

Joyously bizarre

Rays of gold across your face

Shining majesty

Pulls you in with warm embrace

Cov'ring travesty

Cotton clouds up in the sky

Transform as you see

Merely glancing; passing by

Taking form for me

Lean back your head; allow the peace

Take pause as world refuse to cease

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

What I wouldn't give these days to have some time just to lay in the grass and watch pictures in clouds. Your poem reminded me how much I miss that and now I am going to make a goal of doing just that.

[Sourav]

Very nice... Awesome!

[Courtney]

Thanks :D

[Peter H]

this was a simple yet profound poem we often times tend to forget the simple treasures in life are the things we take for granted : the sky and a sun rise is one of them this describes the beauty of a sunrise very vividly its very well written you used your metaphors quite well also i loved it

[Courtney]

Thanks so much! So glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for reading xx