Ambiguous To Come

There will come a time

In everyone's life

Reach through the grime

Beauty come from the strife

What became who you are

Depends all on the past

Moving through was sub par

Before releasing ballast

The end remains unclear

As a foggy winter's night

Is it far or is it near?

Ambiguous to shedding light

Break through the pain and hate and greed

For holding on gains fear to breed

Reviews

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This poem holds some truth, and that is always a great basis for writing. I like your third stanza the best, because it shows how everybody can come to asking different questions about the meaning of life, and where we all go after this. To make this poem better, I would suggest using some punctuation and thinking of it more as a flowing paragraph, and then split it into stanzas rather than sort of forcing it into choppy lines. Other than that, I can see that you have some potential to write great things! :) Good job

[Jordan's Back]

This is a wonderful Write, Full of truths of the Elements of life.