Night

Oh the tranquility

Of a dark Summer's night

To be calm and collected
Relieved of all fright

Take away all the stress

Relax weary eyes

Open them wide

To the stars in the sky

Beauty of Night

Erase feelings of lore

Feelings of love

Replace those you abhor

Whenever you're down

Just want to let go

Remember the Night

When the world is slow

Reviews

[Phillitup]

Beautiful...

The night has and always will be a very mysterious time. One must think of what roams and lurks where no one can see. Dangerous things await. Gives me shivers up my spine when I think of the bad in the night. A ray of sun pierces the darkness when I think of stars and pleasant cold. The feeling of the night on your forehead. Love that! Your poem conveyed it well! Nicely penned!

[Courtney]

Yes, exactly! I'm glad you could see this poem for what it was.. The actual hopeful parts of night that come through all the fearful parts. Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing. :) xx

[Phillitup]

Of course!

[TheDuchessDiary]

I can relate to this poem. It makes me feel light. It is actually the same thing I would like to shout to free myself from all the stress. *Thumbs up*

[JC]

niiiice...This is something that could be read to a youngster before bedtime! could be timeless!

[Courtney]

Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot, xx

[Wolfwind]

A very nice piece. Smooth flow with a calming effect in it's energy. I would suggest on the first line of the fourth stanza to make is "you're". That way it doesn't look like a simple spelling error. =) But then again, you might have it that way on purpose..

Over all it's really good. Keep up the ink!

Aaron

[Jordan's Back]

Beautiful, Charming and sweet. A Graceful write with a superfluous flow. Wonderful Job!