Damaged

Jane was scared. She had never seen tears hit the floor so hard, with such passion. Granted, she had never seen her own father cry. She was confused. "What’s wrong?", she thought. It is predictable what would be running through any average kid's mind; What did I do? My report card came in.. Did they find that stain on the carpet.. But Jane was a good kid. She never got in trouble. Got good grades. She wondered if her father was hurt, she wondered why her mother looked so.. damaged.. staring back at her with blank eyes and a washed out face. It read nothing. She looked so.. broken. She was pondering these thoughts as she suddenly produced her own water droplette down her cheek.She didn't know what was happening and she didn't know why, but she knew things were going to be different as soon as the words were spoken from her fathers scarlett lips.; "She's leaving", he said. The answer read clear in her mind. They were taking her mother away from her. Away from her family.Things were going to change, and they were going to change fast.

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[Smith Courtney]

Thank you :)

[Adele Potter]

Good job! I like this story, and look forward to seeing more.