(Humpty-Dumpty)

Broken.
Just broken.
My humpty-dumpty lifestyle
has been put into effect.
No fixing.
I keep believing that one day
I will be whole.
Except
as much as I try,
I only break more
from crushed hope.
Over and over.
No one can help.
But no one can ever tell.
I'm only another face in the crowd.
Nothing special.
Hope of love is broken.
Crushed.
Even all the horses and men
couldn't begin to put me together again.

Reviews

[D. Pesek]

The fact that you break up the lines into short pieces is a really nice touch, it really adds to the "broken" feeling of this. Even if your "humpty-dumpty lifestyle has been put into effect" and you feel as if everything is broken, at least know that your writing is awesome. I was thoroughly impressed with this piece.

[gemma]

SWEETYYYYYY CALL ME ??? U STILL GOT MY NUMBE RITE? LOVE U

[Erin]

Oh my gosh. I turned to read it because of the title. I kept reading because of the lines. I love reading it because it's AWESOME! I really like this poem. *thumbs up* keep on writing!
PBP