The Dragon

 

The Dragon

 

With wings that make it fly through the heavens,

It soars above us.

 

With claws that make it move easily upon the ground,

It travels the mountain sides.

 

With scales that make it shimmer,

It dazzles us with its beauty.

 

With its massive size and different looks,

It excites us to see it.

 

With its fiery breath and charred victims,

 It hides us away in fear.

 

With a tail of such strength,

It swings it with all its might.

 

With eyes that see and impress with their beauty,

It sees all stare at it in astonishment.

 

Reviews

[jumbie's #1 fan]

You have captures the beauty and magnifcence of a dragon. A very unique poem and beautifully done! Awesome work!

[Paul Wallace]

I love the image you make with that poem. It kind of makes me want to fly off like the dragon. Keep writing!

[Justin Tobey]

Interesting. I like how you wrote that "it hides us away," rather than "we hide" or something similar. I think you could have put a little bit more detail behind each section, but it's not necessary.