Of Anger, Betrayal and Hurting

When some one breaks your trust, there's a feeling of anger, then betrayal and ultimately you are hurt.

Anger:  Something that you feel every time you get hurt.  Some times you don’t notice it.  But it is a feeling that pulses through your blood like the beat of a rave song.  Making you want to jump, to move it out.

 

Betrayal:  It’s the thing that always comes into your mind with the hurt of a friend.  It’s something you can’t explain.  I can imagine, though, that it’s like stabbing a knife through your heart faster than light and then slowly, slower than the seconds going by, pulling it out.  Pulling it out; in your heart a gaping hole.

 

Hurting:  The ache of hurting shows the most.  It grips you next to betrayal, but once betrayal is cleared the hurt still stays.  It lasts longer then that hole in your chest, for the hole shall close.  This, this enters your blood stream, constantly cycling through.  Soon it is forgotten. It is there, silently running through you, waiting to clot.

Author's Note

Hm, I wrote this my senior year of high school. I also haven't edited it since then, hehe, maybe I should do that.

Reviews

[kruser23]

great, descriptive piece

[there is no more from m..]

an amazing write well done

[lawrence bear]

I found this good the way it is, it hit the nail on the head, great piece.

[Chirinos20]

A very nice write. It is what happens with anger. Anger itself can destroy most people and in the same manner make them make a wrong choice. How you control it can actually determine how strong willed you are. Pain is always there no matter if you like it or not. It is a thing that makes us grow into bad or good people. great poem!! thanks for sharing.

[Senseless whatever]

Nice emotional circle. Can definitely relate

[ace]

excellent emotion and great imagery very well done keep it up