Good enough

Good enough

A Poem by Cosmic kid

I love you
I love you so much
But you don't love me
You love her

I will never be as good enough as her
Whatever I do won't even be compared to what she does

I'm always good but never good enough.

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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Ach, anyone who has felt second best in love will know exactly what you mean here. I sometimes think like this, not about another person, but about writing. I think I am good but never good enough. This is quiet a problem! But of course we can't stop being ourselves or doing the thing that we are never good enough at. This is an even bigger problem. Britain's Andy Murray was in tears tdy with Roger Federer smashed him at Wimbledon. Murray was definitely good but not good enough cos Federer had the genius gear which he just shifted into when he needed to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Disappointment can make wish for things we can't have. I like the deep and sad emotion in the poem. Sometime what we want isn't what we need. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2012
Last Updated on July 13, 2012
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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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