Eternity

Eternity

A Poem by Cosmic kid

A wild corduroy young embraces desire
Naked, as a breeze brings smoke
It lingers for eternity.

The rhythm haunts her
As visions of years past float
Atlas hands hold her down

© 2012 Cosmic kid


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Wow...just wow...100^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Cosmic kid

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
kublakhan27

12 Years Ago

No problem :)

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Added on August 21, 2012
Last Updated on August 21, 2012
Tags: Young, children, smoke, wild, love, life

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Cosmic kid
Cosmic kid

Ashland, MA



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A Poem by Cosmic kid