Prologue

If I was a book,

do you think you'd read all the pages?

Come back and take notes. 

Would you love me at all my stages?

Would you judge my first draft?

All the words I have circled red.

Would you ask about the ripped chapters

or the drops from the tears shed?

Would you want to rewrite me?

Change all the words somehow.

Remove some of the character, or, 

maybe add some back in now.

Would you judge me by my cover?

The one God so carefully drew.

Or would you fall in love with it the same way I,

fell in love with you.

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

Loved the read, glad to have stopped by. Really enjoy how you string the phrase of questions along to that great final one...the magic of what makes/constitutes love?

anything but a Mindless Thinker there Mindless Thinker

ken