What Do You See in Me?

What Do You See in Me?

A Poem by Soundsage090
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It is a song I wrote about an unhealthy relationship.

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I have been burning with desire. I have been taking in that fire. Tell me what it is you see. What do you see in me? Please, I want to know.
Because I have been all around and my soul has hit the ground.
So Tell me all of your pains, then I will know.

Well I know that the sun shines
shines on the good and wicked alike.
So when will your karma
your karma come and strike?
Tell me what do you believe
Because I'm listening
Please don't deceive,
deceive me.

Please, I want to know.
Because I have been all around and my soul has hit the ground.
So Tell me all of your pains, then I will know.

© 2014 Soundsage090


Author's Note

Soundsage090
Its talking about. "taking in that fire" is how when someone continuosly puts you down. The part "tell me what you see in me?" is about wondering why the person points out the things they dont like about you, yet they stick around. The next part "I have been all around" is saying been searching all around in your own mind looking for why this person is giving you hate when you show them only Love
. and then "my soul has hit the ground" is saying how this person continues to break me/you down. then it goes "tell me all of your pain" asking the person to just be honest and stop Verbally attacking because I/you will listen then I/you would know and stop running around in my/your mind looking for answers.

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Added on November 29, 2014
Last Updated on November 29, 2014
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Soundsage090
Soundsage090

Auburn, IN



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