Gleam

Gleam

A Poem by Ebb and Flow

I can see that gleam
how I hope it never fades
your eyes pull me in

© 2010 Ebb and Flow


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The eyes are the windows to the soul. Have you ever noticed that when you meet someone you like it is their eyes that pull you in, or just before that first kiss there is a long gaze into the others eyes as each of you draws closer.

I adore your ability to state so much, in so a few words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Perfection. I love haiku's like this..Deep impact!!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Great haiku. Relatable and good. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago
A beautiful Haiku indeed..

Posted 14 Years Ago
The eyes are the windows to the soul. Have you ever noticed that when you meet someone you like it is their eyes that pull you in, or just before that first kiss there is a long gaze into the others eyes as each of you draws closer.

I adore your ability to state so much, in so a few words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice... eye contact has that magic that's hard to explain... it's speaking without voices, connecting without words...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

eyes are one of the first things I notice on a person.

I like.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 19, 2010
Last Updated on September 20, 2010

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Ebb and Flow
Ebb and Flow

Milton Mills, NH



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The names Krystina Michelle Walters Poetry is one of my soul passions in life. Without its passion I wouldn't understand the beauty of the written word or that beauty of this world. "Words have.. more..

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