Doubt

Doubting me

made you see

just what you did to me

 

Trusting you

what to do

ah, the dream to be free

 

No doubting

you pouting

I had to walk away

 

Hoping gone

mighty pawn

no games for you to play

 

Happy now

seeing how

you truly held me back

 

Nothing there

not a care

my life is back on track

Reviews

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Reminds me of my last relationship

[KaySea]

amazing!
this reminds me of a frnd of mine. she doesn't see that the guy she's with is holding her back.

[Raja]

Excellent! The poem has got a figurative approach to reality I sense.

Like it.

Thanks.

Raja.