Boiling Point

When you've reached the end of your fuse...

Grit my teeth
bite my tongue
keep my cool

Clench my fists
take deep breaths
anger keeps rising

Self control slipping
frustration more visible
at a loss for the
right words

Thoughts are raging
emotions running rampant
how can I do this?

Author's Note

*Credit to painter

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

I like the painting that you put with your work. You truly do show your emotions and feeling in how you present your work. The conclusion was well thought out. It leaves the reader hanging on the edge of his seat wondering "what can't she do?" Loved it!

[Ebb and Flow]

I know this is an old review, but I've been out for a while. If I write anything with a strong emotion it is because I write it the moment I feel it. I stop whatever I am doing and just write!

[bubbles]

good description. i started to feel angry while reading it. i hate this fealing cus im terrified i will hit someone

[Brianna Brie]

Nicely written. Short biting words...

[St.Jimmy]

excellent description of a feeling in less words :)
really great job
Keep up the good work!
~Aaradhya

[Kieran James McGovern]

I like this. Short description of something we all know. I certainly relate. Frustration builds and you wind up speaking/acting before thinking. nice work :)

[nostal]

Tense.
Excellent job at conveying the feeling.