Love Did Fly

Caring heart

harmless start

gentle love did fly

Longing glances

taking chances

riding on this high

Tender kiss

ageless bliss

my soul set ablaze

Timeless trust

unspoken lust

dare to ne're part ways

Without a fear

nota tear

such a love so right

 

Longing deep

selfless leap

keeper of my light

Gazing eyes

cheerful cries

how I love you much

Caressing hand

kisses land

never losing touch

Time fleeting

hearts abeating

growing stronger e'er day

You're mine

we're divine

together forever we'll stay

 

Author's Note

*Credit to the artist*

Reviews

[Patches I'm not so new..]

cute, hopeful, loving, exciting , bright and tuneful this is a nice poem filled with the dreams of youth!

[Justin Tobey]

Playful yet sincere. Nice piece. :)

[Tate Morgan]

I like this short sweet to the point and meaningful
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[Periac]

i simple flow with intrigue.....soft and soothing...great experimenting with subtle poetry enchants (growing stronger e'er day,dare to ne're part ways)...overall a pleasant piece...thanks for asking...;)

[Tate Morgan]

What a chipper beat i like it .
Tate

[A]

Love, love, love this! I love the rhyme scheme you went with. I've never read a poem written in that way. Such a great poem! :)