Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Ebb and Flow

An eternal pitch

shrouding the globe in nothing

fire is our hope

© 2009 Ebb and Flow


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My first thought on this was quite different from my second to be sure. First the second, as I can see this as the need for hope and finding something to light the way in a moment of darkness. Second the first, and this one may not appeal to most. The first thought that came to mind, involved the sorry mess we have made of everything and the need to burn it all away so that it might start over. Again, our hope being in fire, but the hope here of a different nature than the latter even if it were the former...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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My first thought on this was quite different from my second to be sure. First the second, as I can see this as the need for hope and finding something to light the way in a moment of darkness. Second the first, and this one may not appeal to most. The first thought that came to mind, involved the sorry mess we have made of everything and the need to burn it all away so that it might start over. Again, our hope being in fire, but the hope here of a different nature than the latter even if it were the former...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Haiku's are so difficult for me to write. I have just two really good one's from you. I love watching fire, how it dances and consumes energy with its bright and warm glow. I appreciate your talent here nicely done~

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Ebb and Flow
Ebb and Flow

Milton Mills, NH



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The names Krystina Michelle Walters Poetry is one of my soul passions in life. Without its passion I wouldn't understand the beauty of the written word or that beauty of this world. "Words have.. more..

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