Dread

Hmmm not sure about this one.

A hole spreads upon this darkness that is placed inside,

this dimness so deep that I try to hide.

It holds, bleeds and seeps through my hollowed veins,

it weeps it dies and has its own pains.

So dark and black this thing that spreads,

this thing that lives too, has its own dreads.

Author's Note

Short something or other. Not sure what this is.

Reviews

[DiMar4u]

intense....such a strong reaction inside me;
feeding off of my pain..i've felt it b4.
thank you for share'n..

[Walter Scott Morrison]

Complexity in a short poem I like that. You don't see that often

[David W Moore III]

Seems like pain and suffering have their own life. Which is very true and they can take your life away from you if you allow. Nice sense of dread

[Rachel DeHart]

I really like this.. It holds a lot of emotion..
"It holds, bleeds and seeps through my hollowed veins,
it weeps it dies and has its own pains."
Those lines are my favorite.