Autumn

I just have one line. I have yet to find the perfect words to finish. I may need a new muse XD. Any idea are welcome.

A dusken whisper of autumn winds...

Author's Note

So idea are most welcome. Or maybe like i said before I just need a new muse.

Reviews

[Periac]

thank you for entering this in the "nature" contest....I'm torn on if its strong enough as one line....out of all the entries...I sit with it in the final ten......it speaks volumes in just a mere few words....amazing

[Mysty Rayn]

This is great. It describes everything perfectly. Well done.

[Justin Tobey]

I think this is marvelous for a single line! I particularly liked this line;

A dusken whisper of autumn winds...

;) Really, it's wonderful. You have some beautiful imagery and sensory details in just that one line. I've never written them down, but I'll often come up with a small sentence or two to describe something, even if it doesn't fit into any poems or stories. I think it's awesome that you wrote it down at all! I'm considering doing this as well. It's a great idea.

[lauren emily]

Very nice! You've captured a lot of Autumn in this sentence.

Nice work,
Lauren

[shoepolish]

the buttery sunshine flowed like butterscotch through the cellar door

[Tangerine]

I love the month of Autumn. Maybe you should write about that feeling you get when you're twirling around in the falling leaves, not caring about how they get tangled in your hair as you jump into the biggest pile of them you can find.

*I hope I helped!*